Last week I wrote a blog to give you some insight into my reasoning behind certain tools in my writing that might seem "unchristian". I used the Old Testament to support my reasoning for including those things. If you haven't read that article yet be sure to scroll down and take a look. This week I'd like to use the same concept to describe the things that I will not include in my writing and why.
On Sex
Sex isn't just a regular part of the "erotica" genre, it's often scattered through anything considered adult enough. While studying writing tips I have run up against multiple people arguing for it's involvement. "If we can include graphic violence" they argue "Why not include graphic sex. Isn't the former worse then the latter."
One writer who advocates strongly for it's involvement is G.R.R. Martin: writer of the "Song of Ice and Fire" series. That, I'm sure, doesn't come as a surprise.
His argument is that sex is a very real and powerful motivator for many people in real life and should be in fiction as well. I might agree with that. But as authors we have an a ability to chose not just what is included in our writing, but how it is handled.
When we compare this to the Old Testament in particular we see that God doesn't shy away from certain truths about when sex and sexual violence. He tells us what is important for us to know. But he doesn't include details (Though some might argue for that in Song of Solomon). No matter how thoroughly you read the Bible you will never find a passage comparable to Fifty Shades of Grey. Telling us that Lot's daughters got him drunk to conceive children with him is a vastly different thing than describing what was done in detail.
What is so distinct about sex that makes it a taboo? Why is this one physical activity so different from others?
Reading has a unique ability to pull you into a world that is not your own. You can see the world through anthers eyes. But as much as that experience may feel real or as much as you may want it to be real we are fully aware that it is only fiction. Reading about murder in a book will not make you feel like a killer or crave killing.
However the human brain is uniquely wired so that it responds to artificial sexual stimulation almost if not just as strongly as it does to the actual physical act. Studies on the effects of pornography has shown that the brain reacts to artificial sexual pleasure to point that it can cause addictions, form habits and cause the consumer to conform to the behavior shown in the source.
One author on a panel on writing Romance said that when we as the author write detailed sex scenes in a book we are essentially forcing the reader to participate. She talked about reading these scenes in terms of actually having sex.
Because of all these factors I have decided that I will not include any sex scenes in my writing. It wasn't a very difficult choice: I am not naturally a romance writer so I'm not exactly drawn to writing this subject.
I will allow certain concessions for the sake of reality and character development. I use the Bible as my guide in this as well. I don't want to simply add things for the sake of having a character that walks the line. There are many things about my characters that I don't share with my readers that affects the book but doesn't have any place in it. My characters sexual pasts and sexual activity is one of those things. If need presses I might put in a scene "behind closed doors", by which I mean that I hint at it's happening but I will not be describing any of it. I haven't had the need yet in the nearly novel and a half that I have written. My characters are busy with other things.
On LGBTQ Characters:
A large portion of the modern American Readership is increasingly liberal. The things that they demand from a book are often less focused around the quality of the plot and the depths of the characters and more focused on Social Justice. Is the protagonist a female, and if so is she strong or weak. Is she well developed and does she avoid typically feminine labors and loves?
Are sexual choices such as sex out side of marriage, and varying types of romantic bonds acknowledged?
Are any of the characters lesbian? Asexual? Gender non-conforming?
As a Bible-believing Christian I am not going to hide the fact that I hold to traditional marriage as the healthiest and wisest form of love. I believe in two genders: man and woman. And I also hold to a Biblical Complimentarian view of marriage. I also believe that the world will function best when men are in major leadership positions and when men are the ones going to battle and woman are on the home-front.
All these things will be reflected in my fiction. That doesn't mean that all my characters are saving sex for marriage or that I have no woman going to war or that could be described as "strong female protagonists". What it does mean is that I will show the effects of poor choices on my characters and in the cultures around them.
What I will not be adding is any LGBTQ characters. This is for one reason. I don't agree with the practice and I know that it will show through the texts. Because I do not feel that my fiction is the best place to address this issue I will not, at least for the foreseeable future, be using any of these tools in developing my characters.
What do you think about the things that I have chosen to leave out of my writing? Is it too much? Not enough?
Next week I will be introducing another character from my Fantasy Trilogy. As of next week I will be officially working on the editing of my novel. I am also writing a science fiction novel for my Wattpad account in order to grow my readership.
I hope you will come back for the introduction of Akharis next week. His complicated character is the most mature of any of my characters, and brings a good deal to the story.
You can also follow me on twitter here and find daily content on my FB page here. You can also get a taste of my writing and meet some of my favorite characters in my sci-fi novel "Malfuntion" here
Sunday, February 28, 2016
Saturday, February 20, 2016
How My Faith Informs My Writing. Pt 1
Some hobbies and careers are explicitly un-Christian.
Most things you decide to spend your time on however, will fall firmly in no-mans land. Writing is one of these. Because pure creativity and diversity in media however you have the ability to make your story very toe that line...or jump it. If you have read my stories and know that I am a conservative, born-again, Calvinist Christian (I know: too many titles), you might be surprised to see what I've put down on paper. Some people might be uncomfortable reading it. Some might think that I am turning my back on some of my morals. Before you think those things know that every word I put in my books is a choice. The themes that I include are developed with purpose. The characters are given a special amount of attention. I am not writing simply out of boredom, I want my work to have a reason for existing. That is why I wanted to release this blog before beta-readers ever touch my book. In it I would like to discuss a few of my reasons for including what I have, and excluding what I did. This won't account for everything in my stories, but at least it will give you an idea why I did what I did.
A Note of Characters:
I hate most Christian fiction. I have read very few that have impacted my life at all. It might have been the genre I was reading. I won't judge you if you enjoy them, but the quality is lacking.
I remember reading a quote when I was young that stuck with me. I cannot remember now the exact words or the source. The basic idea was that Christians should be the very best of artists because we intimately know the creator. We know what beauty really is. Think of great books like Lord of the Rings, Anna Karenina and The Brothers Karamazov. These were all written by Christians, but do not force themselves into a straight jacket. Because of that, they have created a huge impact both in and out of the Christian world.
My problem with Christian fiction is about the same as it is with Christian movies. Christians are so terrified of breaching their morals that their characters more resemble paper dolls cut out of church bulletins then actual living breathing humans. Unfortunately, character is the most essential aspect of fiction so the affect is a sub-par story with forced morals and shallow emotions. There are a few exceptions to this but I'm speaking generally here. My challenge as a writer is to create Characters that are real. This means that they will have human nature. Human nature means evil.
In order for my characters to feel real I have to let them follow a different moral code then me. I have to let them have a different god then mine. I have to let them live organically out of the culture I've created for them.
As a believer that means that I will not agree with a lot of the things my characters do. Despite this I can still find ways to tell the narrative I chose and to ask questions of the audience that will hopefully lead them to the right answers. After all, we learn best from mistakes.
So how do I judge what is OK to add into my story and what I should avoid at all costs. After all, I can refuse to read "Game of Thrones" based on it's content and then add the same into my stories. Even if that is a realistic format for humanity. Do I chose my content based on my emotions? Do I just wing it?
The answer is found where it always is: The Bible. I have chosen to used the Holy book to guide every other book I write in hopes that God's words will be active through me, even if it's not explicit.
On Foul Language.
I don't swear. That being said, I am generally not to offended by it. Most swear words are arbitrary. "Crap" for instance, means nothing different from "Shit", but one is looked down on more then the other.
Strong language has purpose and can be used to great effect when used properly. God doesn't cut corners on strong language and strong imagery. He uses language that would make us blush from our pews if we spoke them in church. But when God calls Israel the harlot or compares a rogue nation to a virile donkey we cannot say He is sinning. Those very words that make us blush are words that the Bible commands we do not take out of scripture.
This doesn't mean that we should all start coloring up our language. We need to understand that this kind of language has a purpose and a place. When God uses it He uses it to bring home a point or tocatch someone's attention.
When I use bad language I do so very carefully. Sometimes I will use the words that offend me less in simple dialogue for the purpose of tightening the mood, expressing the character or even just for a laugh. After all, these are supposed to be the characters words, not mine. As long as I am developing a character that will impact the reader then I feel comfortable with it. If a reader is more convinced at a character by his or her use of an expletive then they will take them more seriously when they have a deeper line that is meant to provoke though.
There are some words that have heavier meaning and are actually degrading to humanity in any form they are used. The "F" word, "Bitch" and any of the words that convey sexual promiscuity. "Bastard" and more. These words I will not use unless the sentiment cannot be conveyed any other way. The concept is one that has to lead to a redemptive point though. If a guy just wants to call an ex-girlfriend a name, there are far better names to use. However, if a concept has to be brought across in order to allow the reader to ask themselves the "deep" questions, I will use one of these more weighty words but only sparingly.
Some words simply have no place in my story and can be replaced with a wiser choice. I will have no need to use racial expletives. I can see a time and a place for them, perhaps in a historical fiction in the same vein as "Uncle Tom's Cabin" or "How to Kill a Mockingbird" but for my purposes I can use words that only would hold weight in that particular culture.
Racism, classicism and the value of human life are things that I address in my book. Because I am working with Science Fiction and Fantasy I can avoid anything that carries deeper meaning in this culture and create versions in my story that might convey the sentiment without causing any discomfort.
How do you view strong language? Is it ever acceptable to use it? Would you be less likely to read my books knowing that I use strong language in them?
On My Use of Violence.
Most violence doesn't bother me. When reading in a book or watching a movie I expect a bit of violence. Maybe I am desensitized, but I actually enjoy a good "dark" story. That being said, there are times when it becomes excessive or pointless.
The Bible doesn't use kid gloves with death and violence. I remember being quite young when I first read the story of the Levite and his concubine in Judges 19. I was horrified. But we cannot look at this story or any other instance of death and destruction as pointless.
Violence can be an excellent tool for adding weight to a scene and expressing the danger that the characters are in but it has a deeper purpose. Violence can reinforce positive views on the value of human life, teach empathy, encourage real life action against social injustices and help us address our own mortality. There is no greater tool for evangelism then a correct understanding of death.
When we go through times of great pain we are brought face to face with these types of questions. Fiction brings us a way to address these things in a safer way. However, we have to avoid violence just for the sake of violence.
America has an obsession with violence. For this reason you will never see me writing about a serial killer, or describing sexual violence in depth. It's simply unnecessary and unhealthy. These things should not be glorified. In each instance in which I include death in my stories I try to focus on the reaction of the character and bring up questions of the morality of those actions.
What is your view of violence. Is the use of violence in media justified or do we glorify it unnecessarily?
I will leave you with these points for now but stay tuned for next weeks blog where I will be addressing some more points as well as some things that you will never see me use in my fictional work. What are your thoughts on these subjects? Be sure to comment and let me know.
As always, I encourage you too look me up at Facebook and twitter. I am also publishing a Sci-Fi novel on my wattpad account if you would like to get a taste of my writing style.
Most things you decide to spend your time on however, will fall firmly in no-mans land. Writing is one of these. Because pure creativity and diversity in media however you have the ability to make your story very toe that line...or jump it. If you have read my stories and know that I am a conservative, born-again, Calvinist Christian (I know: too many titles), you might be surprised to see what I've put down on paper. Some people might be uncomfortable reading it. Some might think that I am turning my back on some of my morals. Before you think those things know that every word I put in my books is a choice. The themes that I include are developed with purpose. The characters are given a special amount of attention. I am not writing simply out of boredom, I want my work to have a reason for existing. That is why I wanted to release this blog before beta-readers ever touch my book. In it I would like to discuss a few of my reasons for including what I have, and excluding what I did. This won't account for everything in my stories, but at least it will give you an idea why I did what I did.
A Note of Characters:
I hate most Christian fiction. I have read very few that have impacted my life at all. It might have been the genre I was reading. I won't judge you if you enjoy them, but the quality is lacking.
I remember reading a quote when I was young that stuck with me. I cannot remember now the exact words or the source. The basic idea was that Christians should be the very best of artists because we intimately know the creator. We know what beauty really is. Think of great books like Lord of the Rings, Anna Karenina and The Brothers Karamazov. These were all written by Christians, but do not force themselves into a straight jacket. Because of that, they have created a huge impact both in and out of the Christian world.
My problem with Christian fiction is about the same as it is with Christian movies. Christians are so terrified of breaching their morals that their characters more resemble paper dolls cut out of church bulletins then actual living breathing humans. Unfortunately, character is the most essential aspect of fiction so the affect is a sub-par story with forced morals and shallow emotions. There are a few exceptions to this but I'm speaking generally here. My challenge as a writer is to create Characters that are real. This means that they will have human nature. Human nature means evil.
In order for my characters to feel real I have to let them follow a different moral code then me. I have to let them have a different god then mine. I have to let them live organically out of the culture I've created for them.
As a believer that means that I will not agree with a lot of the things my characters do. Despite this I can still find ways to tell the narrative I chose and to ask questions of the audience that will hopefully lead them to the right answers. After all, we learn best from mistakes.
So how do I judge what is OK to add into my story and what I should avoid at all costs. After all, I can refuse to read "Game of Thrones" based on it's content and then add the same into my stories. Even if that is a realistic format for humanity. Do I chose my content based on my emotions? Do I just wing it?
The answer is found where it always is: The Bible. I have chosen to used the Holy book to guide every other book I write in hopes that God's words will be active through me, even if it's not explicit.
On Foul Language.
I don't swear. That being said, I am generally not to offended by it. Most swear words are arbitrary. "Crap" for instance, means nothing different from "Shit", but one is looked down on more then the other.
Strong language has purpose and can be used to great effect when used properly. God doesn't cut corners on strong language and strong imagery. He uses language that would make us blush from our pews if we spoke them in church. But when God calls Israel the harlot or compares a rogue nation to a virile donkey we cannot say He is sinning. Those very words that make us blush are words that the Bible commands we do not take out of scripture.
This doesn't mean that we should all start coloring up our language. We need to understand that this kind of language has a purpose and a place. When God uses it He uses it to bring home a point or tocatch someone's attention.
When I use bad language I do so very carefully. Sometimes I will use the words that offend me less in simple dialogue for the purpose of tightening the mood, expressing the character or even just for a laugh. After all, these are supposed to be the characters words, not mine. As long as I am developing a character that will impact the reader then I feel comfortable with it. If a reader is more convinced at a character by his or her use of an expletive then they will take them more seriously when they have a deeper line that is meant to provoke though.
There are some words that have heavier meaning and are actually degrading to humanity in any form they are used. The "F" word, "Bitch" and any of the words that convey sexual promiscuity. "Bastard" and more. These words I will not use unless the sentiment cannot be conveyed any other way. The concept is one that has to lead to a redemptive point though. If a guy just wants to call an ex-girlfriend a name, there are far better names to use. However, if a concept has to be brought across in order to allow the reader to ask themselves the "deep" questions, I will use one of these more weighty words but only sparingly.
Some words simply have no place in my story and can be replaced with a wiser choice. I will have no need to use racial expletives. I can see a time and a place for them, perhaps in a historical fiction in the same vein as "Uncle Tom's Cabin" or "How to Kill a Mockingbird" but for my purposes I can use words that only would hold weight in that particular culture.
Racism, classicism and the value of human life are things that I address in my book. Because I am working with Science Fiction and Fantasy I can avoid anything that carries deeper meaning in this culture and create versions in my story that might convey the sentiment without causing any discomfort.
How do you view strong language? Is it ever acceptable to use it? Would you be less likely to read my books knowing that I use strong language in them?
On My Use of Violence.
Most violence doesn't bother me. When reading in a book or watching a movie I expect a bit of violence. Maybe I am desensitized, but I actually enjoy a good "dark" story. That being said, there are times when it becomes excessive or pointless.
The Bible doesn't use kid gloves with death and violence. I remember being quite young when I first read the story of the Levite and his concubine in Judges 19. I was horrified. But we cannot look at this story or any other instance of death and destruction as pointless.
Violence can be an excellent tool for adding weight to a scene and expressing the danger that the characters are in but it has a deeper purpose. Violence can reinforce positive views on the value of human life, teach empathy, encourage real life action against social injustices and help us address our own mortality. There is no greater tool for evangelism then a correct understanding of death.
When we go through times of great pain we are brought face to face with these types of questions. Fiction brings us a way to address these things in a safer way. However, we have to avoid violence just for the sake of violence.
America has an obsession with violence. For this reason you will never see me writing about a serial killer, or describing sexual violence in depth. It's simply unnecessary and unhealthy. These things should not be glorified. In each instance in which I include death in my stories I try to focus on the reaction of the character and bring up questions of the morality of those actions.
What is your view of violence. Is the use of violence in media justified or do we glorify it unnecessarily?
I will leave you with these points for now but stay tuned for next weeks blog where I will be addressing some more points as well as some things that you will never see me use in my fictional work. What are your thoughts on these subjects? Be sure to comment and let me know.
As always, I encourage you too look me up at Facebook and twitter. I am also publishing a Sci-Fi novel on my wattpad account if you would like to get a taste of my writing style.
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